Coiled
Autor: abgemeldet
Erstellt: 22.08.2009
Letzte Änderung: 27.10.2009
Letzte Änderung: 27.10.2009
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Englisch
2855 Wörter, 3 Kapitel
2855 Wörter, 3 Kapitel
Thema: Inu Yasha
Hauptcharaktere: Kagome, Sesshoumaru
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 22.08.2009 U: 27.10.2009 |
Kommentare (1 ) 2855 Wörter |
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Prolog It's not even begun yet. | E: 29.08.2009 U: 29.08.2009 |
Kommentare (0) 285 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Kapitel 1 The chance meeting | E: 29.08.2009 U: 03.09.2009 |
Kommentare (1) 2393 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Kapitel 2 Kapitel 2 | E: 27.10.2009 U: 27.10.2009 |
Kommentare (0) 227 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Von: abgemeldet
2009-08-29T16:52:16+00:00
29.08.2009 18:52
Hey there! I didn´t knew that there were people from England here! Ore are you from America? i´m from Germany, like most of us. And actually I´m so frustrated that nobody even thought I would like to have rewiews too, so now I`m reading to be able to think of other things. And then there was your fanfic. I was really surprised to see that is was written in English. People often give their fanfics english titles because they think that is cooler but they don´t write in english. But you should write a short description of what happens in your story, people will only read the title, and don´t think it could be interessting if there is no such thing. So, that was the first part, now to your story;
Kago and Inu are fighting again? Shouldn´t they find it boring after so much fights? But these two are hopeless, they will never learn it. Very typical and in charakter. So Kago meets Sessy? I´m not really a fan of this pairing, but it could become interessting to see what happens. If I were Kago I would run for it when I had the chance, but if it was me, I would have run to Sessy and done all the things I want to do with him. These marks in his face and his hair.... (argh! Every time Sess is mentioned I forget what I wanted to say)Sessy is dangerous girl! You shouldn´t go near him, he will kill you! Kago is really dumb.
Poor Inu, got sit again and now is laying in a hole and it must really hurt to get slammed in the ground.
I think this could get interessting. I think I will read the next chapter when it is released.
The little crazy thing named Imi
Kago and Inu are fighting again? Shouldn´t they find it boring after so much fights? But these two are hopeless, they will never learn it. Very typical and in charakter. So Kago meets Sessy? I´m not really a fan of this pairing, but it could become interessting to see what happens. If I were Kago I would run for it when I had the chance, but if it was me, I would have run to Sessy and done all the things I want to do with him. These marks in his face and his hair.... (argh! Every time Sess is mentioned I forget what I wanted to say)Sessy is dangerous girl! You shouldn´t go near him, he will kill you! Kago is really dumb.
Poor Inu, got sit again and now is laying in a hole and it must really hurt to get slammed in the ground.
I think this could get interessting. I think I will read the next chapter when it is released.
The little crazy thing named Imi
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1: The chance meeting